WALT: Write a metaphor poem
Today I am creating a DLO based on our task in this middle block. We firstly went and had a go on Menti and started to share ideas. Then we read fantastic examples of others and began. I found this task very easy and difficult. Easy because I was describing and comparing myself. And difficult because I did have to use metaphors to describe myself. As always feel free to comment weather if I made mistakes or I could do a DLO for anyone or you. Thank you for viewing my blog 😀😀😀
The Mafi Poem !
Mafi is a perfectly presented parcel,
wrapped in a bright colourful paper
And well sealed with a funky bright ribbon on top.
Mafi is a hard working train,
she follows where the train tracks lead her.
Mafi is a pile of warm stacks of pancakes
drowning in delicious dripping golden syrup.
Mafi is a wise wishful well grown tree,
you can chop her down,
but she will eventually grow back.
Mafi is an onion,
she has many layers of emotions.
Those are some sensational metaphors! I love that you managed to weave alliteration into a few of them too! - Mrs Best, Fairhaven School (Te Puke)
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Hi Mafi. I like your poem because it has some amazing stuff about you. I have made a poem before but it wasn't like yours. Have you thought of putting a colourful background and your coluor for your letters can be blue?
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